Re-Writing Dialogue - Nigel Conversation

INT. SCOTT'S HOUSE, DAY

SCOTT and DAN are in Scott's house talking about Nigel and the plan to bring the Catacombs to life. 

SCOTT

There is a plan to bring the Catacombs to life. I found out about this when I was talking to my friend Nigel earlier today. 

DAN

So what part do you play in this plan?

Scott gets up from his seat and checks that there is nobody around listening to the conversation. He then sits back down and speaks to Dan again.

SCOTT

This is a secret Dan. You can't tell anybody, I trust you. 

DAN

You can tell me things Scott, whats wrong?

SCOTT

You might remember a few years ago when I was not at work?

DAN

Yeah I didn't have a clue where you were! No contact, nothing! Where were you?

SCOTT

I was running a few tests in a lab with Nigel. One thing led to another in these tests and it turns out that they gave me super powers. 

DAN

That is insane, how am I meant to believe you? It makes no sense, is this how you can help with this plan?

SCOTT

Technically yes. With these powers we plan to bring the Catacombs to life, but you don't know about this. You cannot tell anybody, especially Nigel.

Dan looks shocked and doesn't know what to say. He gets up and paces up and down the room in front of Scott.

DAN

I want to know more about him.

SCOTT

Who?

DAN

Nigel, when did you meet him? 

SCOTT

The main reason I was not at work for them few days is because I was at an Armed Forces convention. He was there too, we got talking and had a lot in common. 

DAN

So it was there and then that he came up with this plan? Why does he want to do it anyway?

SCOTT

He has the same powers as me. I am the only person that knows. He got these powers from the same tests that he did on me a few years ago. He was serving for the army in Chernobyl and was made to do these tests, from which he gained the powers. He needed help, I could help him, thats how it worked out.

DAN

So you had no choice, he has dropped you in at the deep end?! I need to speak to him, this is madness. 

SCOTT

It was my choice. I told you that you don't know about these powers and not to tell Nigel, just leave it.

Scott storms out of the room and leaves Dan with his head in his hands. After a few seconds, Dan walks out after Scott and calls him.

DAN

Scott we need to talk more about this come on!

SCOTT

I know how you feel, just leave it like I said!